Saturday, December 29, 2007

"Without you.."


"Like water without wave,
And building without base,
Like summers without rain,
And tattoo without pain,
Thats how my life will be
without You!

Like man without brain,
And city without lane,
Like drink without ice,
And curry without spice,
That's how my life will be
without You!

Like forest without tree,
And sagitarian without being free,
Like business without gain,
And track without train,
That's how my life will be
without You!"

6 comments:

modernmonk said...

"like nature without eyes
like himalaya without ice
like man without wisdom
like life without freedom
that is how my life will be
without you"

Unknown said...

:))...its a nice add-on to the original composotion....seems we think aike!...gud to know tht!!!...cheers!!

kshitij jain said...
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Gunjan said...

nice nice, the person would be really lucky 4 whom u wld have written it

swati said...

How strongly and simply you have penned down the emotions. Beautifully captured every emotion attached with separation. Great Going !!

Unknown said...

Thanks Swati :)